Have you ever soaked in Songs in the Key of Life sitting smack dab in front of two delicious $5000 studio speakers?
Ever since that experience, whenever I listen to Stevie Wonder on any other set of speakers, my ears are bombarded with mush; like the difference between a crispy HDTV and a fuzzy old time TV. The only thing that comes close is listening to Mr. Wonder on a pristine set of headphones.
For two years I have endured those horrible white ear buds that came with my iPod. Having had enough, I set out to grab a decent set of cans (‘headphones’ to those not in the know).
Without boring you of the details of my hunt (that’s another whole lengthy article), I ending up narrowing the search to the Sennheiser HD 280, I arrived at this decision with absolutely no help from any site that was actually selling them.
Retailers are missing incredible opportunities to sell more product. All they would need to do is simply commit to writing better product descriptions, descriptions that would not only help prospects make a buying decision, but actually lust after products. It can be done.
On my hunt some sites did better than others. You can always count on Crutchfield.com to do a decent job, especially when you compare it to the product copy at JR.com. But JR.com seems to have at least one great writer on the payroll. My question: why isn’t this blog post at JR.com part of the product description? Why not unleash this writer on more product descriptions?
So many clients come to us wanting to find some sort of conversion magic, some technical trick or design tactic that will increase conversion. It seems that most want to ignore that fact that their flimsy product descriptions are fueling buying apathy. So many are willing to invest big cash on a new site design or back end technology, but so few are willing to invest in brilliant writers, or even educate their existing writers.
When was the last time a product description had you drooling?