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“You Ain’t All That!” — A Marketing Copy Autopsy, Part 2
Posted By Jeff Sexton On September 17, 2007 @ 10:18 am In Articles,Buying Process,Copywriting,Customer Focus,Persuasive Online Copywriting | 9 Comments
My last piece began with jargon-filled marketing copy  and ended with clear, customer-focused copy. The problem was that the “clear” copy lacked emotional punch. My promised solution was to compensate for that through stronger emotion. This article is where that happens.
Notice I said compensate; not “overcome” or “fix”. A powerful message with mediocre copy beats a weak message with world-class copy any day. But if nobody in your market has a powerful message, a par-for-the-industry message with stronger emotion can make you king of that particular molehill – at least until someone with the guts to create a truly valuable business steps up to replace you.
Now, let’s run through some steps for creating higher-impact emotional copy…
In this case, a reasonable assumption is that tech managers who don’t understand the power of marketing, or don’t think they need help with it, will never arrive at the example Website. If they think superior technology sells itself, it’s unlikely they’re looking for marketing help.
So for this Website, our copy will mostly be aimed at the technical product managers who actually realize that, yeah, marketing does make a difference. So why don’t these people just go out and just hire someone? If they’d like to get marketing help, but haven’t yet, what’s holding them back?
Hmm… It could be:
It could be any number of reasons , but it’s clear that a need isn’t being satisfied.
Congratulations. You’re probably sitting on every tech manager’s dream: an objectively better technology that’s positioned to kick the crap out of the competition. Yet you’re smart enough to know that marketing still matters. You wouldn’t be here if you weren’t.
Notice how I’m speaking directly to the customer we defined in Step 1…
Perhaps you don’t even want to know what it may have felt like to be the brand manager for Betamax, Amiga Computers, IBM’s OS2, or Apple’s Newton. Maybe you’re worried about hiring some marketing “expert” with a fancy suit and a mouth full of jargon who won’t help anybody — let alone the customer — understand anything better than your company already does on its own.
With that last paragraph, I’ve encapsulated the fears which drove them to this site in the first place with clear examples — examples that, with any luck, will kill the “better mousetrap” mythology in their minds. Then I touch on what’s holding them back, while poking fun at my own industry.
Step 3: Introduce an image that expands the paradigm
Franky Frankly, we don’t blame you. Still, you need people from outside your fold to translate your product’s advantages into compelling, emotional reasons to buy. You need someone to help you tell your story, so that it can act as a vehicle for your technology’s success.
OK, so if that seems a little clunky (it does to me), know that we’ll edit later. Right now, we’re just getting ideas down on paper. I’m just trying to introduce the metaphor of marketing = vehicle for success. Marketing = stories that draws in an emotional, fickle market that sometimes slits the throats of better mousetraps.
Step 4: Show how this new image better matches the “real” self-image of the client
Now let’s put things back together again, polish ‘em up, and see what we have:
Congratulations. You’re sitting on every tech manager’s dream – an objectively better technology
Its specs kick the crap out of the competition, but you’re still smart enough to know that marketing matters.
You’re here because you never want to know what it’s like being the ex-brand manager for Betamax, Amiga Computers, OS2 Warp, or Apple’s Newton.
Still, you’re worried about hiring some marketing “expert” with a fancy suit and a mouth full of jargon who won’t help anybody — let alone the customer — understand anything better than your company already does on its own. Frankly, we don’t blame you. You’re not looking for hype. You need people to craft messaging that will bridge the gap between superior technology and triumphant success.
A great story makes the difference between the Apple Newton and the iPod.
If you’re approaching a new campaign or product launch, we can help through our:
Proprietary methodology for conducting customer research, Messaging that’s proven to speak to customer desires. Ability to train your sales team to follow-up on your messaging – translating corporate marketing to “street level” sales conversations. And next-generation strategies for going to market that move beyond event-based product launches.
Since 1994, we’ve produced successful messaging for over 150 enterprise technology companies, including BEA Systems, Hyperion, Mercury, Oracle, Peoplesoft, SAP, Sungard and WebEx.
Congratulations, you’re sitting on every savvy tech manager’s marketing dream.
[Editors note: the author of this post is now blogging at jeffsextonwrites.com ]
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 any number of reasons: http://www.grokdotcom.com/2007/06/25/what-makes-people-buy/
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