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	<title>Comments on: 2 Pieces of Bad Writing Advice &#8212; And What to Do Instead</title>
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		<title>By: Doesn&#8217;t Graphic Design/Layout Affect Scanning Patterns? &#124; FutureNow's GrokDotCom / Marketing Optimization Blog</title>
		<link>http://www.grokdotcom.com/2007/11/01/2-peices-of-bad-writing-advice-and-what-to-do-instead/comment-page-1/#comment-1159239</link>
		<dc:creator>Doesn&#8217;t Graphic Design/Layout Affect Scanning Patterns? &#124; FutureNow's GrokDotCom / Marketing Optimization Blog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 13 Apr 2009 12:04:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Front load user- and action-oriented terms.  For calls to action, we&#8217;ve always recommended an imperative verb + (implied) user benefit [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Front load user- and action-oriented terms.  For calls to action, we&#8217;ve always recommended an imperative verb + (implied) user benefit [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Mary</title>
		<link>http://www.grokdotcom.com/2007/11/01/2-peices-of-bad-writing-advice-and-what-to-do-instead/comment-page-1/#comment-1135034</link>
		<dc:creator>Mary</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Jan 2009 15:01:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve been agonizing a lot over the active/passive voice thing on my site. Thanks bringing me  back to the Elements of Style. Now, I am going to focus on saying what I mean as clearly as I can. And that&#039;s it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve been agonizing a lot over the active/passive voice thing on my site. Thanks bringing me  back to the Elements of Style. Now, I am going to focus on saying what I mean as clearly as I can. And that&#8217;s it.</p>
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		<title>By: SEO Copywriter</title>
		<link>http://www.grokdotcom.com/2007/11/01/2-peices-of-bad-writing-advice-and-what-to-do-instead/comment-page-1/#comment-1107531</link>
		<dc:creator>SEO Copywriter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Nov 2008 23:59:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great copywriting tips Jeff! It was great reading.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great copywriting tips Jeff! It was great reading.</p>
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		<title>By: The Writer's Pulse &#187; Writing &#187; 51 Ways To Improve Your Writing</title>
		<link>http://www.grokdotcom.com/2007/11/01/2-peices-of-bad-writing-advice-and-what-to-do-instead/comment-page-1/#comment-1106174</link>
		<dc:creator>The Writer's Pulse &#187; Writing &#187; 51 Ways To Improve Your Writing</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Nov 2008 18:37:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 17. Use the active voice, but don&#8217;t forget the passive. This advice is a constant, always present in writing circles everywhere. The active voice is strong, but the passive voice still has its uses. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] 17. Use the active voice, but don&#8217;t forget the passive. This advice is a constant, always present in writing circles everywhere. The active voice is strong, but the passive voice still has its uses. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Tom</title>
		<link>http://www.grokdotcom.com/2007/11/01/2-peices-of-bad-writing-advice-and-what-to-do-instead/comment-page-1/#comment-591722</link>
		<dc:creator>Tom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Mar 2008 21:46:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi there, great writing is a thing to be promoted and protected. I guess, you should go through this blog, with informaiton on great writing, help and tips. The author is trying to promote good writing here. &lt;a href=&quot;http://cutewriting.blogspot.com&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Cute writing: good writing help and tips&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi there, great writing is a thing to be promoted and protected. I guess, you should go through this blog, with informaiton on great writing, help and tips. The author is trying to promote good writing here. <a href="http://cutewriting.blogspot.com">Cute writing: good writing help and tips</a></p>
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		<title>By: David</title>
		<link>http://www.grokdotcom.com/2007/11/01/2-peices-of-bad-writing-advice-and-what-to-do-instead/comment-page-1/#comment-546499</link>
		<dc:creator>David</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Feb 2008 16:44:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I see what you&#039;re saying.  I think basically people should say exactly what they mean and no more, using just the right words.  Sounds too easy, right?

Well that&#039;s what takes years to develop =).  I do have a bunch of &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.scogrowth.com/resources.php&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt; writing tips and tricks&lt;/a&gt; I&#039;d love for you to check out tho.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I see what you&#8217;re saying.  I think basically people should say exactly what they mean and no more, using just the right words.  Sounds too easy, right?</p>
<p>Well that&#8217;s what takes years to develop =).  I do have a bunch of <a href="http://www.scogrowth.com/resources.php"> writing tips and tricks</a> I&#8217;d love for you to check out tho.</p>
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		<title>By: Online Copywriting 101: The Ultimate Cheat Sheet &#8212; Part 2</title>
		<link>http://www.grokdotcom.com/2007/11/01/2-peices-of-bad-writing-advice-and-what-to-do-instead/comment-page-1/#comment-317495</link>
		<dc:creator>Online Copywriting 101: The Ultimate Cheat Sheet &#8212; Part 2</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Nov 2007 16:54:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] &quot;Two Pieces of Bad Writing Advice &#8212; And What to Do Instead&quot; &#8212; GrokDotCom (Actionable advice on when, where and how to let the passive voice take [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] &#34;Two Pieces of Bad Writing Advice &#8212; And What to Do Instead&#34; &#8212; GrokDotCom (Actionable advice on when, where and how to let the passive voice take [...]</p>
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		<title>By: ConnectFive///// &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Writing advice - the good and the bad</title>
		<link>http://www.grokdotcom.com/2007/11/01/2-peices-of-bad-writing-advice-and-what-to-do-instead/comment-page-1/#comment-292800</link>
		<dc:creator>ConnectFive///// &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Writing advice - the good and the bad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Nov 2007 15:58:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] for a while now and it usually has a lot of good articles. I thought Jeff Saxton&#8217;s latest post 2 Pieces of Bad Writing Advice — And What to Do Instead was a pretty good. I particularly like his analogy that illustrates the need to focus on the [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] for a while now and it usually has a lot of good articles. I thought Jeff Saxton&#8217;s latest post 2 Pieces of Bad Writing Advice — And What to Do Instead was a pretty good. I particularly like his analogy that illustrates the need to focus on the [...]</p>
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