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On Target Copywriting and the next “Buns of Steel”
Posted By Jeff Sexton On August 5, 2009 @ 9:50 am In Copywriting,Customer Focus,Customer Insight,Improving Conversion,Marketing Rants,Personas | 17 Comments
In fact, you may not like the product, either, simply because you’re probably not part of their targeted audience. So make up your mind now to look past that in order to see the marketing decisions behind both the product and the site.
Let’s start by imagining that you’ve just been challenged to enter the fitness category. Not to sell some machine or piece of equipment, but to sell a workout program. You can pick any angle of approach you want, and let’s assume you have the wherewithal to find the science or content to make the angle of approach you pick the “real deal.”
What angle of approach would you choose?
And for what audience would you tailor your messaging?
Now, do I actually like the Website? No. I think the cartoon character at the beginning is a huge turnoff. So is forcing visitors to engage with your “Calculate your Adonis Index” tool before letting them past the splash pages and onto the real sales copy . Nor do I make any claims for the validity of the statements made on this site or by these entrepreneurs.
What I DO like is the incredibly intelligent approach to marketing a workout program. The last workout program to take such a brazen approach was the infamous buns of steal videotape. You know, the tape that became a cultural icon , that spawned a 22-tape “of steel” series , and that launched Tamilee Web into fitness icon status?
While I don’t think The Adonis Effect will become as high-profile as Buns of Steel (and that might well be a Marketing to Women lesson  for you right there), I do think it’ll make a killing off its target audience. And here’s the take-away lesson from that:
Always make sure your messaging/copy is speaking to the real, deeply felt, emotional needs of the prospective customer. Crummy writing that’s on target will always beat great writing that’s directed at anything other than the heart of the reader. And of course, that goes for websites as well.
You can ding The Adonis Effect for it’s cheesy Website(s) – along with any number of usability and persuasive faux pas – all you want, but the essential message is on target. And I’d be willing to bet money on their success because of that one factor.
Back when Holly Buchanan  and I used to routinely teach Persuasive Online Copywriting , we’d have the class write a short piece of copy based on a standard demographic/target-audience profile, then we’d replace that crappy (but typical) marketing profile with personas and have the students re-write their copy.
Invariably, the second pieces of copy blew away the first – not because we had magically turned the students into better writers, but always because the copy went from stereotypical advertising appeals to emotionally on target copy for intended audience.
And you know who else preached this same “On Target” message? The late Gary Halbert. Just watch this video and you’ll see exactly what I’m talking about at around the 1:40 mark:
P.S. Although a public/open session of Persuasive Online Copywriting hasn’t been held in about a year, you can still get the majority of the lessons from that 1-day course by attending Writing for the Radio and Internet  at Wizard Academy . Chris Maddock  and I co-teach that 2-day course, with Chris focusing on improving core writing skills while I teach a specific methodology for creating and linking on target web copy.
[Editor's note: the author of this post is now blogging at jeffsextonwrites.com ]
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URLs in this post:
 The Adonis Effect: http://www.adoniseffect.com/
 the real sales copy: http://www.adoniseffect.com/true-account
 the tape that became a cultural icon: http://news.google.com/newspapers?nid=1290&dat=19930302&id=4DQQAAAAIBAJ&sjid=mo4DAAAAIBAJ&pg=5244,601363
 22-tape “of steel” series: http://www.videofitness.com/instructors/webb.php
 Marketing to Women lesson: http://www.wonderbranding.com/2008/05/four-fallacies-about-female-consumers/
 Holly Buchanan: http://marketingtowomenonline.typepad.com/
 Persuasive Online Copywriting: http://www.futurenowinc.com/persuasive_online_copywriting_training.htm
 Image: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KEyG-5R5prw
 Writing for the Radio and Internet: https://wizardacademy.org/scripts/prodList.asp?idCategory=236
 Wizard Academy: https://wizardacademy.org/scripts/openExtra.asp?extra=1
 Chris Maddock: http://www.beneaththecover.com/chris-maddock/
 jeffsextonwrites.com: http://www.jeffsextonwrites.com/
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